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		<title>Progress</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Jun 2010 01:13:49 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[My second Monday off was as successful as the first. I added nearly seven pages of new material and was pleased with what I wrote. That gave me momentum and this morning I wrote 600 words that guided the story back to an existing scene which I&#8217;ll modify tomorrow. If this experiment continues to be [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My second Monday off was as successful as the first. I added nearly seven pages of new material and was pleased with what I wrote. That gave me momentum and this morning I wrote 600 words that guided the story back to an existing scene which I&#8217;ll modify tomorrow. If this experiment continues to be a success, I will have to try it again. Maybe I’ll give it a try for the next novel’s first draft.</p>
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		<title>15 pages in one day? Sure!</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Jun 2010 00:04:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Progress on NHI has been disappointingly slow. I thought about taking a week off to focus on it, but I knew what would happen: I&#8217;d slack off on Monday thinking that I had plenty of time. Tuesday, too. Something would come up on Wednesday, and then Thursday is so close to the end of the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Progress on NHI has been disappointingly slow. I thought about taking a week off to focus on it, but I knew what would happen: I&#8217;d slack off on Monday thinking that I had plenty of time. Tuesday, too. Something would come up on Wednesday, and then Thursday is so close to the end of the week, why bother? On Friday, I&#8217;d eat a 7,000 calorie meal to console myself, so I&#8217;d get no writing done <strong>and </strong>gain weight.</p>
<p>Instead, I worked with my boss to schedule five consecutive Monday vacation days. I figured that Mondays would be the best day since I do all my household chores on the weekend and there would be few distractions. Today was the first day. I&#8217;d hoped to write three new pages and incorporate up to seven pages of the previous draft into the new. I exceeded my expectations by fifty percent-and I even goofed off a little in the afternoon.</p>
<p>For the rest of the week, ten pages of new and existing material is a reasonable goal. Next Monday, I&#8217;ll make sure I have even fewer things to distract me. (I needed a haircut and did some laundry that really could have waited.) If I stick with it, I could have this draft done by mid to late July.</p>
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		<title>Slow progress on NHI</title>
		<link>http://salvatorefalco.com/2010/03/25/slow-progress-on-nhi/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Mar 2010 01:02:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[This week I started rewriting No Humans Involved after spending some time rethinking the characters and plot. I&#8217;m making slower progress than I&#8217;d hoped. A combination of lack of sleep and work stress has made it difficult to focus, and I&#8217;ve written less than 500 words a day. The good news is that what I&#8217;ve [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This week I started rewriting <em>No Humans Involved </em>after spending some time rethinking the characters and plot. I&#8217;m making slower progress than I&#8217;d hoped. A combination of lack of sleep and work stress has made it difficult to focus, and I&#8217;ve written less than 500 words a day.</p>
<p>The good news is that what I&#8217;ve written so far looks good. I&#8217;m currently taking Margie Lawson&#8217;s Empowering Characters&#8217; Emotions course on-line and while I have less time than I&#8217;d like to participate, the lectures and assignments have helped me improve my writing a great deal. Now all I need to do is pick up the pace in order to meet the September 1 deadline.</p>
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		<title>Ending on a high note</title>
		<link>http://salvatorefalco.com/2009/12/28/ending-on-a-high-note/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 28 Dec 2009 21:05:04 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[This morning, I finished the first draft of a short story I&#8217;ve been scratching at all year like a persistent insect bite. I&#8217;ve already written about the reason it took so long in my last post. Once I got a fuller understanding of my protagonist, writing it became much easier. Frequent pauses during construction of [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This morning, I finished the first draft of a short story I&#8217;ve been scratching at all year like a persistent insect bite. I&#8217;ve already written about the reason it took so long in my last post. Once I got a fuller understanding of my protagonist, writing it became much easier. Frequent pauses during construction of the manuscript mean that the plot structure is uneven. Like a shattered bone that wasn&#8217;t properly set, it&#8217;s going to require some pain in order to bring it back into alignment. I&#8217;ll fix the worst instances of that next week or the week after, but the heavy surgery will wait until I&#8217;ve gotten feedback from my critique group mid-month.</p>
<p>Next up, I&#8217;ll wrestle &#8220;Big Little Blonde&#8221; onto the page. I started this one in March, got distracted, took it in a wildly new direction, and then crashed because (again) I didn&#8217;t really understand the characters. I&#8217;ve decided to go back to the original concept but salvage the offshoot for a different story another time.</p>
<p>Next year I intend to revise <em>No Humans Involved</em> and begin seeking representation for it, write at least half a dozen new short stories, and start research for a third novel.</p>
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		<title>NHI First Draft: Lessons Learned</title>
		<link>http://salvatorefalco.com/2009/10/08/nhi-first-draft-lessons-learned/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 01:03:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Sam</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I finished the first draft of No Humans Involved this morning. It came in at 61,888 words. That word count is a little thin for a mystery novel. Revision will beef it up significantly. My first drafts are always light on setting and description, which means that even if I cut existing material, the second [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I finished the first draft of <em>No Humans Involved</em> this morning. It came in at 61,888 words. That word count is a little thin for a mystery novel. Revision will beef it up significantly. My first drafts are always light on setting and description, which means that even if I cut existing material, the second draft is usually longer. In addition, I need to add a subplot involving a second viewpoint character. I wasn&#8217;t certain that it would enhance the story to have it, so I left it out, but now I know that it really is crucial. That will add some heft to the word count, too. I plan to revise the manuscript this spring.</p>
<p>Before I move on to a new project, it&#8217;s worth looking at what I&#8217;ve learned. The most important: don&#8217;t pause until the first draft is done. I first conceived NHI in the summer of 2008. I spent a couple months creating the outline, then set it aside for a year. When I came back to it, my concept had changed enough that the outline was no longer useful. I spent another month rethinking the outline. It would have been better if I&#8217;d written a draft from that first outline as soon as I&#8217;d finished it. Getting some distance is great between drafts. Until that first draft is done, though, delays are a waste of time.</p>
<p>Not all lessons come from errors. I was pleased to learn that for the most part, the outline methodology I&#8217;ve developed works very well. Solid scene outlines allowed me to write very rapidly. This is the second project to benefit from a detailed outline: the romance novella I wrote last spring went very quickly, too. In the future, I expect I&#8217;ll become adept at planning scenes in my head and will be able to write from a bullet-point outline. In the meant time, I&#8217;ve found what works for me.</p>
<p>The final lesson: I should focus my energy on one thing at a time. Until this week, I would work on the novel in the morning, then at lunch I&#8217;d work on something else, like a short story. Sometimes I&#8217;d even dabble with a third project at night. This week, I focused on NHI and wrote almost 8,000 words in four days. If I had done that from the beginning of the draft, I&#8217;d have finished a month ago. The story would have been more cohesive, too. As it was, I found myself drifting from the main idea a little as the weeks wore on. In the future, I&#8217;m going to devote my writing energy to one project at a time.</p>
<p>So what&#8217;s next? I&#8217;m not sure. I have several short stories that I need to complete, a novella to revise, and research to do toward a new novel. I&#8217;ll pick one tomorrow</p>
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